Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, April 20, 2020
online learning day 4
For literacy, we did a piece of descriptive writing about, The Man Who Walked Between The Two Towers. Most of us had no I dear who this was, but we could all kind of guess where it was. Where do you think it was? Well, it was the twin towers in New York. Here is a link to the story. We did four or five quality sentences, in a first-person view and of our character choice. Here is mine.
I only see the string thin tight rope and the miraculous sunrise across New york. The unfinished north tower was about a football field away. I was not nervous. I had to be calm, open and close I thought. I put my first foot onto the rope that felt like air, I've dreamed of this for many years.
For math today I made a house design, with all the measurements. My guidelines were there are two adults and 2 children in the house. So there had to be at least two bedrooms 1 bathroom one living room and one kitchen. I made this on Tinkercad.
Have you made a Tinkercad before? Had you heard of The Man Who Walked Between The Two Towers?
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Hi Lucas, nice work! I like your descriptive piece of writing about The Man Who Walked Between The Two Towers. I had not heard of it before, but I can really imagine what it might have been like to be standing up there. I like your house design as well! I have never used Tinkercad before, but maybe I need to give it a go, it looks pretty cool! Keep up the great work. Caitlin :)
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