Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 9, 2019
Jonah Lomu
For our writing this term we wrote an inspirational New Zealand report. My one was about Jonah Lomu.
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That was an awesome slide Lucas, the most intresting part was when I learnt what his disease did to him and it was really sad to,
ReplyDeleteIt must be rare because only six people died from it,
Next time you should check if the text and the background dont blend in because there was a slide that you couldn't read some of the words.
Thanks Max I will do that know.
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