Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 19, 2018
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Lucas, I like your goal ladder because it has lots of steps and is a good goal. Next time you could make your lines a bit straight. Apart from that great goal ladder. From Lachie.
ReplyDeleteNice job Lucas, I like your ladder because It has loads of ways to get up your writing standard. Next time you could add a bit more decoration. Nice job Lucas I hope you achieved your goal well done. :)
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ReplyDeleteHi Lucas Its Fynn from Toroa, I really like the goals you have set for yourself, and how you have set your presentation. Maybe next time explain why you want to improve on these goals. Anyway good job.
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