Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, June 12, 2018
ABOUT ME
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeletenice work
ReplyDeletegood job
ReplyDeleteok thanks for the comment
ReplyDeleteI like the way you told everyone a lot of detail about yourself . I also like how you told us about your friends, pets and your family.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of a poem that I had to do about myself at my old school.
Next time you could make up another interesting story about yourself.
Why do you.ike animation the most?.
I like the way you told everyone a lot of detail about yourself . I also like how you told us about your friends, pets and your family.
This reminded me of a poem that I had to do about myself at my old school.
Next time you could make up another interesting story about yourself.
Why do you.ike animation the most?.
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